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前不久,在拜访一位老友时,曾谈及孩子们作文的事,老友说他的儿子小学五年级时曾写过一篇题为《我的妈妈》的作文,经他这位教语文的爸爸加工润色,得了个95分的好成绩.升入初中后,老师布置的第一篇作文是《记我熟悉的一个人》,妈妈自然是孩子最熟悉的了,于是孩子又把那篇《我的妈妈》搬了上去,结果又得了高分,老师还选作了范文.到了初二,换了语文老师,在一次写《我最敬佩的人》时,这个“聪明”孩子把《我的妈妈》稍加改头换面,又交
Not long ago, when visiting an old friend, he talked about the children’s writing. The old friend said that his son had written an essay entitled “My Mom” in the fifth grade of elementary school. The father of Chinese processed it and got a good score of 95. After I was admitted to junior high school, the first essay written by the teacher was “a person I remember,” and my mother was naturally the most familiar to the child. So the child put it again. The article “My Mom” moved up and got another high score. The teacher also chose Fan Wen. By the second day, he changed the language teacher. When he wrote “My Most Admired Man,” the “smart” child put it. My Mom changed her face slightly